2021高三英语江苏省高三全真模拟应用文写作编第二版（含详解）
（2021届江苏省2020-2021学年百校联考高三第二次考试）
假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语作文竞赛。请你以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 音乐对你的重要性；
2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Music and Me
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【答案】Music and Me
I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life. I
always think music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties.
Among so much music, I like pop music most. I can listen to it anywhere in the world. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind. Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 音乐对你的重要性；
2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
share sth. with sb.; part of; offer sb. sth.; be busy doing; be stuck in; help sb. do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life.
2. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties.
3. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life.这句话运用了名词性从句。
[高分句型2]：It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties.这句话运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]：Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
（2021届江苏省海门中学、姜堰中学、淮阴中学12月联考）
假如你是李华，你一个在英国的笔友William得知上月你校组织了校园义卖(Charity Sale)活动，来信向你询问活动详情，请给他写封回信，内容如下:
1、活动详情；2、你的感受。
注意:1、写作词数应为80左右； 2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. William,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. William,
Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.
The Charity Sale started at 2:30 p.m. on November 29, when some teachers and all students in Senior Three got together on the playground. Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves. Teachers and students walked around, searching for what they were interested in. It went well and finished at 4:30 p.m.. In the end, all the money earned would go to the students in need. I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.
Look forward to interesting stories in your school!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国的笔友William写封回信，介绍学校组织的校园义卖(Charity Sale)活动的详情。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示问候；
2.说明活动详情；
3.表达自己的感受。
第二步：列提纲(重点词组)
be interested in；be willing to do sth.；get together；on the playground；set up；walk around；search for；in the end；in need；build up；sense of responsibility；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.
2.The Charity Sale started at 2:30 p.m. on November 29, when some teachers and all students in Senior Three got together on the playground.
3.Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves.
4.Teachers and students walked around, searching for what they were interested in.
5.It went well and finished at 4:30 p.m..
6.All the money earned would go to the students in need.
7.I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.
8.Look forward to interesting stories in your school!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序： In the end
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Very glad to know that you are interested in the Charity Sale held in our school last month, I’m willing to give you a brief introduction to the activity.(that引导宾语从句，held为过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]
Small booths were set up as arranged to advertise their goods, including food, books and even some greeting cards, some of which were made by themselves.(which引导非性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
I think it significant and worthwhile to experience this activity, for we can build up our sense of responsibility and join our hands to help others.(it为形式宾语，动词不定式为真正的宾语)
（2021届江苏省淮安市高中校协作体高三上学期检测）
假定你是李华，今天(星期六，4 月 2 日，多云)学校组织去科学馆参加主题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。要点如下：
1. 野生动植物的现状；
2. 保护野生动植物的意义；
3. 保护野生动植物的措施。注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Saturday April 2 Cloudy
This afternoon I took part in an organized activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”in the science museum. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of people's harmful activities,which causes a decrease of wildlife. Besides, many people hunt wild animals for their meat and money. To make matters worse, in response, the decrease is doing harm to people's life.
So it is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection.Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is to protect ourselves.All in all, I benefit a lot from today's activity.
【解析】
【分析】本文属于提纲类作文。要求考生就参加的学校组织去科学馆主题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动写一篇日记。
【详解】第一步：审题
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，个别处可用现在进行时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 野生动植物的现状；2. 保护野生动植物的意义；3. 保护野生动植物的措施。
第二步：列提纲 (重点词组)：take part in,with the theme of ,at present,because of, causes a decrease of wildlife,hunt wild animals, do harm to ,take effective measures to protect our environment,raise the awareness of ,
第三步：连词成句:1.This afternoon I took part in an organized activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”in the science museum.
2.From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of people's harmful activities,which causes a decrease of wildlife.
3.Many people hunt wild animals for their meat and money.
4.The decrease is doing harm to people's life.
5. It is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection.
6.Wild animals are friends of our human beings.
7.To protect them is to protect ourselves.8.All in all, I benefit a lot from today's activity.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系：besides,to make matters worse，all in all
2.表因果关系：so
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of people's harmful activities,which causes a decrease of wildlife. 使用宾语从句、非性定语从句
[高分句型2]So it is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection.用it做形式主语
[高分句型3]To protect them is to protect ourselves.使用不定式做主语
（2021届江苏省南京市六校联合体高三上学期12月联考）
假定你是学生会李华，新年即将来临，你校将举办晚会，请你写信给你校外教老
师John，内容包括：
1. 邀请他参加晚会；
2. 晚会的时间、地点；
3. 活动安排。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear John,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I am writing to invite you to our party in celebration of the coming New Year.
First, the party is scheduled to be held in the Music Hall at 6:00 p.m. on December 31st. Second, students and teachers in our school will put on various
performances ranging from dancing to talk shows. At last, there will also be interesting games, in which the winners can get prizes. Should you sing a song at the party, it would do us a great honor.
I sincerely hope you can attend the party. Looking forward to your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教John写封邀请函，邀请他参加新年晚会。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 邀请他参加晚会；
2. 晚会的时间、地点；
3. 活动安排。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
invite sb. to to do sth.; be scheduled to do sth.; put on; range from…to…; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to invite you to our party in celebration of the coming New Year.
2. First, the party is scheduled to be held in the Music Hall at 6:00 p.m. on December 31st.
3. Second, students and teachers in our school will put on various performances ranging from dancing to talk shows.
4. Looking forward to your presence.
5.I sincerely hope you can attend the party.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序：First, Second, At last
表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also)(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] At last, there will also be interesting games, in which the winners can get prizes.用了“介词+关系代词”(in which)引导的非性定语从句。
[高分句型2] I sincerely hope you can attend the party.用了省略连接词that的宾语从句。
（2021届江苏省天一中学、南京师范大学附属中学、海安中学高三12月联考）
假定你是李华，你的英国好友 Jim在申请大学过程中，就专业选择产生了困惑，写信向你求助。请根据以下要点提示，给Jim写一封回信：
1.对 Jim的困感表示理解；
2.给 Jim提出建议(至少两条)；
3.表达祝福。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头结尾已给出，不包含在字数内；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice.
You must feel as if you were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to. Calm down and clear your head. To begin with, list your possible choices and give
priority to what you are really interested in. Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment. Last but not least,seeking advice from your parents makes sense.
I hope my advice will be of help and you will choose a desired major.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim写封邮件，对他在申请大学过程中，就专业选择产生的困惑提供建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对 Jim的困感表示理解；2.给 Jim提出建议(至少两条)；3.表达祝福
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be faced with; offer some advice; calm down; to begin with; give priority to; are interested in; ignore career prospects; seek advice from; make sense; be of help
第三步：连词成句
1.You must feel as if you were all at sea, which I can, definitely, relate to.
2.Calm down and clear your head.
3.To begin with, list your possible choices and give priority to what you are really interested in.
4.Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment.
5.Last but not least,seeking advice from your parents makes sense.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… (供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you are faced with the dilemma of deciding on d proper college major, I am writing to offer some advice.运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型2]Furthermore, never should you ignore career prospects, which will affect your future employment.运用了非性定语从句，和部分倒装。
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